When revising your written work, what should you revise first?

overall structure

Explanation:

When it comes to reviewing a written work, many people think that it is a work focused only on the orthographic area and semantics. However, in the act of review, checking all aspects of the text is very important. For this reason, when reviewing a text you should first review the overall structure because this will give you an overview of the text allowing you to put everything in order.

he can eat everything and drink whatever he wants

explanation:

harlem's  cotton club boasted the talents of duke ellington. singers such as bessie smith and billie holiday popularized blues and jazz vocals. jelly roll morton and louis armstrong drew huge audiences as white americans as well as african americans caught jazz fever.