Plesae in english i will give brainlist answer and
compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:
original: my father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
revised: my father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.
what was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence? (10 points)

a longer phrase was converted to a single word.

a modifier that did not add meaning was removed.

redundant phrases were eliminated.

repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.