Read the sentence and answer the following question: i have many beliefs about how the traffic light system could perform better. which revision would make this sentence more precise?

i believe small changes to the timing would improve this traffic light system.
i have some changes that i believe would make the traffic light system work better.
if the traffic light system can be addressed, i have some ideas that would make it better.
the traffic light system would perform better if my beliefs were heard.

A: I believe small changes to the timing would improve this traffic light system.

Explanation:

 The revision in the option A makes the sentence more precise because it is objective and clear. Someone saying that he or she has 'many beliefs' is only a vague statement if they want to call attention of the responsible for the traffic light system. Therefore, a more specific and objective suggestion can obtain better response.

sensory details?

so i`m assuming you are writing something from a bats (the animal) point of view. if this is the case, you can use sights, sounds, feelings, and tastes.

and idk what you mean by domain, but all of the sensory details will depend on where the bat is.

a bat doesn't see color very well, so its surroundings will be dulled.

it can hear super well. so maybe it can hear the insects on the ground

feelings. you can imagine how a bat would feel from its perspective. it all depends on where it lives.

maybe it can taste the salt in the air, or smell water, or something. all of these details are completely dependent on where it is located.

hope this .

the answer is academic paper

and the second should be college professor