I'm supposed to be doing a descriptive graph with sensory details, and in my first paragraph im supposed to leave the impression i want of the person im writing about. did i do that or does something need to be honest opinions (not done with it)
for a long time i’ve looked up to my sister, she is very inspirational and influential. she makes everything feel alright when i feel like things are falling down on me. her voice when she is makes me feel right at home, it’s . being around her makes me feel happy and upbeat, she sees a lot when something is wrong and that makes me feel a lot better. she tends to get back up every time she falls down and that in itself makes me look up to her even more. i see a lot that makes her stronger every day. she inspires me to follow my dreams and stay true to myself and let no one stop me. she’s always there when i need her and it feels good to know you have someone who won’t let you down, i always feel sure when i’m around her. my sister and i are like best friends and we always fight but it never lasts, she’s pretty and strong and independent which makes me want to be as well, she doesn’t let anyone or anything bring her down. she inspires me to keep going no matter what obstacles come my way and to never stop. she’s the kind of person that never gives up and loves to others, she’s caring and . she’s the kind of person, who sets her mind to something and never lets anyone distract her; she knows how to make everyone feel good when she’s around. she is very caring and tends to people out a lot, we have a lot of memories together and they’re all great! we’ve had a lot of good times and she is always the life of the party, she knows how to make everything and everyone feel good and especially about themselves. she is a very upbeat person and that in itself says a lot about her.
my sister can sometimes be down on herself but she is always sure to make everyone around her happy, she’s a giving person and always been that way no matter what she is going through. she always loves to and make sure everything is in order; she leaves nothing but good influences on me she wants more from me and wants me to be everything i can possibly be in the future, she wants me to know that the sky is the limit and there is nothing i can’t do. she’s also very supportive in everything i do which makes me feel amazing because i know that i can count on her and look to her for anything.