I've always dreamed of designing formula one race cars for a living. as a kid, i'd spend hours watching the races, drawing the cars, and building elaborate models. i was a pretty good soccer player, but not as good as my older brother. during high school, i worked very hard studying physics and learning about aerodynamics. i spent summers visiting races and talking to the drivers about what was important to them in a race car.
a peer review should find that this paragraph
a. contains spelling errors.
b. needs a topic sentence.
c. is not logically ordered.
d. contains extraneous information.

List some things u like to do with close friends(bff)

Read the excerpt from “man listening to disc.” to tommy potter for taking the time to join us on this breezy afternoon with his most unwieldy bass and to the esteemed arthur taylor who is somehow managing to navigate this crowd with his cumbersome drums. and i bow deeply to thelonious monk for figuring out a way to motorize—or whatever—his huge piano so he could be with us today. which of the following additional features would best enhance the reader’s understanding of this excerpt? a diagram showing the narrator’s route through the city a visual simulation of the man walking down the street audio samples of music by the specified musicians textbook chapters on the history of jazz musicians

How did the language of the gettysburg address differ from the language in the secondary source about this speech?