Which of the sentences below is a good illustration of using concrete details in our biography?

a. after she lost her job, her bathroom door was suddenly locked and loud sobbing emerged from under it.

b. she was so disappointed after she lost her first job that she cried for a lot.

c. shortly after she was hired for her first job, she was fired, much to her disappointment.

Making a story about a myfwa(wolf and human) this is what i have is it good? my name is sylvia stone its been years since bunny's trusted us wolves and its stupid how this on bunny sellina bully's me only because i threatend to eat her years before we trusted each so mabey u might say she deserves revange is say i kill her once we start war harsh? ? if it is i dint give a single heck about it.plz tell me what to fix and u can edit it if u would like the pic is what i want her to look like i didn't want to show her face yet.