Which revision fixes the dangling modifier in this sentence?

while walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow, the weather was miserable.

while i was walking almost a mile to school, the weather was miserable, with wet, heavy snow.

almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow, while i was walking to school, the weather was miserable.

while walking to school almost a mile in the heavy, wet snow, the weather was miserable.

the weather was miserable while walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow.

Electricity powered home and factories. how did electricity change americans' lives

Read the excerpt from queen elizabeth's address to the troops at tilbury. let tyrants fear, i have always so behaved myself, that, under god, i have placed my chiefest strength and safeguard in the loyal hearts and good will of my subjects, and therefore i am come amongst you, as you see, at this time, not for my recreation and disport, but being resolved in the midst and heat of the battle, to live or die among you all, to lay down for my god, and for my kingdoms, and for my people, my honour, and my blood, even in the dust. which statement best describes queen elizabeth's use of rhetorical appeals in this excerpt? she relies on ethos by explaining that she has previous experience fighting in battles. she relies on pathos by providing examples of other successes she has had as a ruler. she relies on ethos by establishing that she is there for more than just recreation. she relies on pathos by using emotionally charged words to motivate the troops.

Create a purpose statement based on the graphic organizer in "section ii: finding the main point."