Curfews have been used effectively in many towns to reduce crime. by having kids return home at a set time, they will also achieve better grades in school. high-schoolers who obey their curfew will make our nation stronger by becoming better leaders. even president obama agrees, "education is the key to this country's future." which revision criterion could be used to improve this excerpt? a. logic b. transparency c. word choice d. use of support

A. Logic

Explanation:

This is the revision criterion that could be used to improve this excerpt. In this text, the author makes the claim that curfews are effective in reducing crime. He also claims that it helps children have better grades and that it makes better leaders. However, he does not support it with logic or evidence. There is not explanation as to why curfews have all these effects. Therefore, the passage is not very logical.

onto a large boat, and mark the water level that the boat sinks to. then, take the elephant out and put a bunch of marked weights onto the boat until it reaches the same water level. add up the masses of the weights to get the weight of the elephant.