How can the following information be better written?

air quality in smithton improved in may. the improvement was due to the closing of the motor plant in april. it created smog.

a. get to the specific point of air improvement later in the reading since it's not important.
b. move the smog creating comment to the beginning since it's the most important.
c. combine sentences to condense repetitive information about improvement.

What would be an example of foreshadowing in a story about a magician who ends up going bad from too much power? a. the author shows the magician preparing his tricks before a show. b. the narrator describes the magician's rise in popularity at the beginning of the story. c. the reader is first introduced to the magician having fun scaring audiences with his tricks. d. the story begins on a cold autumn day in the suburbs of a big city

Isaw my future flash before me and it did not take me anytime to slow down. i need to replace the words "it did".

Wi n t e r acrostic poem worth 10 points but giving 30