Ihave to write a monologue, a friend of mine me but i was wondering, what should i add and where?

here's what i have so far:

if it’s not love i wouldn’t be writing this, love is something i feel, something i got, i see it every day, my heart wouldn’t leave love because my heart is that love, and that heart is my joey sosoka every time i sleep my heart keep thinking of his love, every time i wake up my heart live with his love, a good friend once said “the love of months and years stays in mind, but the love of days stays and hides” in this life we meet people and when they stay in our life forever they stay in the in the mind but some of them stay for couple of days and leave, it’s all about responsibilities i’m sure that everyone in this world can get responsible enough and take his girl into his eyes and be proud of her.

Read the passage below and answer the question that follows. ‘you make me feel uncivilized, daisy,’ i confessed on my second glass of corky but rather impressive claret. ‘can’t you talk about crops or something? ’ i meant nothing in particular by this remark but it was taken up in an unexpected way. ‘civilization’s going to pieces,’ broke out tom violently. ‘i’ve gotten to be a terrible pessimist about things. have you read ‘the rise of the coloured empires’ by this man goddard? ’ ‘why, no,’ i answered, rather surprised by his tone. ‘well, it’s a fine book, and everybody ought to read it. the idea is if we don’t look out the white race will be—will be utterly submerged. it’s all scientific stuff; it’s been proved.’ in this passage, tom’s ideas about race relations come off as uncivilized. what literary device is fitzgerald using here? irony personification metaphor simile