Any revising and/or editing needed in this poem? Giving brainliest to honest personnel Miguel's Torment
by falling
Miguel couldn't stop thinking about the war
It was just so soldiers and blood
But he could never forget the score

That morning, Miguel was shocked by the floor
He found himself feeling rather dud
Miguel couldn't stop thinking about the war

Later, Miguel was spooked by a drawer
He tried to focus on a scud
But he could never forget the score

Cody tried to distract him with a mentor
Said it was time to start thinking about a crud
Miguel couldn't stop thinking about the war

Miguel decided to change therefore
The war was like a toxic thud
But he could never forget the score

Miguel nosedived like a dead ore
His mind turned into a clwyd
Miguel couldn't stop thinking about the war
But he could never forget the score