Which statement best explains how effectively the passage uses vivid description?
For hours, I worked on my pumpkin creation. The neighborhood fall
festival was just a day away, and I wanted to win the pumpkin-carving
prize. I had decided a few weeks ago on a cool design that I
discovered on the Internet. The design idea even came with easy step-
by-step instructions." Now, as I inspected the pumpkin in front of me. I
realized something important. Just because directions say "easy" it
doesn't mean it's true
O A. The vivid description is effective, because the passage uses
figurative language that paints images in the reader's mind
B. The vivid description is not effective, because the passage uses
ordinary words that do not create vivid images
C. The vivid description is not effective, because it does not create
the appropriate celebratory tone for a story about winning a
contest
D. The mid description is effective because it creates a sense of
tension that helps bud suspense about the outcome of the
contest

B

Explanation:

B : The vivid description is not effective, because the passage uses

ordinary words that do not create vivid images

Explanation:

correct

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

a. the image doesn't give relevant information.

explanation:

what does a guy holding a paper have to do with bees and their natural instinct when moving and protecting their hives?

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