Pls help me. I wrote a persuasive essay all I need you to do is read over it tell me if I should turn it in or tell me what I need to fix I need a good grade so pls help

Explanation:

You should indent your paragraphs and each paragraph should have 1-7 sentences. Make sure that your essay support whichever you that you think is right. Don't start your sentence with also.

i would say that these are the two thesis statements best for a literary analysis essay on recurring themes in shakespeare's romeo and juliet:

1.  in romeo and juliet, shakespeare demonstrates that love comes in a variety of forms, be it romantic, familial, or between friends.

2.  shakespeare explores the struggle for identity through the character of juliet in his play romeo and juliet.

the other theses aren't reoccurring in this play. 

explanation:

the use of “as” in the example to draw the resemblance. some more examples of common similes are given below. common examples of simile. our soldiers are as brave as lions. her cheeks are red like a rose. he is as funny as a monkey. the water well was as dry as a bone. he is as cunning as a fox. simile introduces vividness into what we say.