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Ineed with another opening line. here's the idea: a girl got detention for something she didn't do, and had to stay afterschool until evening. she headed towards the bathroom, only to be lured away by distant music. she walks down the dark hallway (which lead to the auditorium) and saw a boy playing the piano, perfectly. i just need a detailed description of this. best will be awarded brainliest. you

Dogs make wonderful pets because they us stay happy and healthy. the topic sentence is "dogs make wonderful pets." , is this correct? i keep doubting myself.

Read the paragraph. in fact, teenagers contribute a great deal to their community. this is another reason why they must be taken into account when public policy is debated. over eighty percent of teens spend time volunteering at their schools and other organizations. this is an example of statistical analysis layering point of view outlining