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English, 13.04.2021 21:30 taridunkley724
Sierra is writing an email to her city councilman suggesting that the city’s bicycle rental program be extended to her neighborhood. After receiving some feedback from her mother, she knows she needs to make some changes to make her writing more effective. Read the following paragraph from her first draft.
(1) Our neighborhood needs the city’s bicycle rental program. (2) Public transportation doesn’t reach us, so many of us have to walk everywhere. (3) In addition, if they could rent bikes, people with cars could avoid having to drive into the city. (4) Everyone in this neighborhood says this would help us out a lot.
Which sentence does Sierra need to rewrite in order to further develop and strengthen her argument?
A. sentence 1
B. sentence 2
C. sentence 3
D. sentence 4
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