Write a formal letter to the principal in which you suggest ways to
improve the playground.​

If you feel the school is deficient in the way it manages the education of students, and I sympathize with this because there is no school out there which does a perfect job, then you should approach writing to the principal in a diplomatic, but assertive way.

Consider that there will always be differences in opinion as to what is valuable for education, some of us have no time for authoritarian and rules-based school life, and some of us simply don’t know why schools insist on teaching certain subjects.

Also consider that the principal is a man/woman who has studied, and gained some impressive qualifications, it takes a long time and much personal effort to gain these credentials, and they usually know what they are talking about.

I would begin by praising the school for what it does well in your eyes, because no school is going to be so bad that it does not get some things right, yes?

Explanation:

returning points to main

i decided to stay late in the laboratory to continue my experiment with the lightbulb. at midnight, thomas edison opened the door and walked in with his head held high.

1. he leaned on the wall and observed me carefully.

2. his harsh scrutiny made me self-conscious of my skills in the lab.

3. perhaps it was just me, but the air in the laboratory began to thicken as i found myself having difficulty to breathe.

4. i turned to look at him fully as i mentally prepared myself for what my very first words would be to thomas edison.

5. the next couple of seconds shocked me. it wasn't me who spoke, but rather him and with diction i could never think of using in a simple sentence.

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hey, sorry if this was bad, i really didn't know what to write but i wanted to you. is there anything that you had to include within the excerpt?