Which revision would most improve this excerpt from a narrative? Like many other 12-year-olds, Hannah loved animals. She especially
loved horses. Because her mother taught riding lessons at a nearby
barn, Hannah got to spend a lot of time caring for the horses and riding
them. Hannah considered herself lucky to even borrow other people's
horses, so she was shocked to learn that the man had left her a
beautiful mare, Diamond, in his will. She had never expected to own
her own horse!
A. Describing the barn in more detail
B. Explaining how Hannah would care for the horses
C. Introducing the character who left Hannah the horse
D. Including a resolution to the problem

which of the following was specifically permitted by the emancipation proclamation?

free african americans were allowed to fight for the confederacy.

free african americans were allowed to enlist in the union army and navy.

enslaved people in border states were allowed to move to the north.

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both the address and the poster use diction to convey their message. diction is defined as a style of writing or speaking based on the types of words chosen in order to send a message. parallelism is when a similar sentence structure is used for several sentences on a text; roosevelt's address doesn't follow that. repetition has to do with repeating a word or sentence in order to emphasize and idea, however neither the poster nor the address use repetion. finally, the address doesn't use images to convey a message.

what is the context here? we need to know what story you're talking about : )

the purpose of the heading in the passage is to identify who is telling the story.

this excerpt is part of the book sugar changed the world (2010) written by marc aronson and marina budhos. as the book has been written by two people, the heading "marc" indicates that this specific excerpt is being narrated by aronson. in the fragment, marc describes his grandfather's story after hearing it from his cousin. however, there are other excerpts where budhos is the one that tells the story of her family.

aronson and budhos, who are husband and wife in real life, decided to write sugar changed the world when they found out how sugar, which had an important role in slavery and economy, changed their ancestors' lives.