How is cohesive writing different from writing that lacks cohesion? Cohesive writing provides better proof for the writer’s ideas.
In cohesive writing, the words are mostly specialized vocabulary related to the topic
In cohesive writing, the ideas flow together in ways that make sense to readers.

Read the paragraph from nick’s personal narrative. standing alone in my family’s barn, i thought about how much hard work and time my parents had invested—how much hard work and time we had all invested—in maintaining a fully operational farm. i did not remember a time when my clothes had not reeked of manure or my hair had not held fast to brittle pieces of straw. what would happen if my parents had to sell the farm so we could move closer to my grandparents? just as i was attempting to imagine a life in the city, a sudden commotion erupted and interrupted my thoughts. with animals squawking and dust flying, i scrambled to pinpoint the source of this unexpected intrusion. in seconds that felt more like minutes, i was successful . . and i could scarcely believe what my eyes were seeing. which element of a personal narrative would be best for nick to include next?

How many times do you read a text when you use the close reading model?i am desperate

The empire state building was constructed by one hundred workers