I need help with my grammar and if there are any errors. How to make a Mexican Dessert
INTRODUCTION
Attention getter: Have you ever tried a delicious Mexican dessert? It's Biónico.
Specific Purpose Statement: Today I will teach you how to make a special Mexican dessert, bionico.
Credibility: This is a very traditional recipe that my mom makes on special occasions and that my grandmother has passed down from generation to generation.
Significance statement: What I also love about Biónicos is that it has a variety of fruit that is healthy to eat, great for all ages, and that it is easy to make.
Preview Statement: Now I'm going to tell you the ingredients you will need. After that, I will teach you how to make it step by step.
Transition: Make sure you have all the ingredients before you begin. Also, that your area and utensils are clean.
BODY
The first following material you will need is:
1. 2 Spoons
2. Can Opener
3. 1 Mixing Bowl or Tupperware
4. Whisk
5. Kitchen towel
6. Knife
7. Cutting board
8. Plate or Bowl to put your fruit
Once having all your materials, you will start to gather your ingredients that are:
1. 2 Cans of Table Creams
2. 1 Can of Sweetened Condensed Milk
3. Shredded Coconut Flakes
4. 1 Tablespoon of Granola
5. 8 strawberries
6. 8 grapes
7. 1 Appel
8. 1 Banana
Transition: After gathering your materials we can start making the Biónico. Now pay attention to following these steps:
1st Step: You will open your two Table Creams Cans and pour them into your bowl or Tupperware.
2nd Step: Then you will open your Sweet Condensed Milk using your can opener and pour it into your bowl.
3rd Step: Mix your Table Cream and Sweet Condensed Milk together using your Whisk or spoon.
4th Step: After mixing the ingredients you will start to cut your fruit.
5th Step: Cut the strawberries into squares then add them to your plate or bowl.
6th Step: Then cut your Appel into squares and then add them to your bowl.
7th Step: Cut the banana into slices and add it to your bowl.
8th Step: Add your grapes into the bowl.
9th step: Add the creamy mixture onto your fruit and enjoy.
Transition: This dessert looks delicious but let’s go over how we made the Bionico.
Conclusion:
Review Statement: With the ingredients and material listed you can now show your friends and family how to make a Bionico.
Final thought: I hope your family and friends will enjoy this delicious recipe.