Reread the prompt and response below. Then, revise the response so that it better addresses the purpose and audience

Write 3 parallel sentences about an animal of your choice

Which is not a controlling idea in the essay? a) average joggers b) importance of tradition eliminate c) olympic-level competitors d) fräbel-designed crystal peach

Reread lines 6-7 "the survivor." determine how the tone of these differs from the preceding lines (1-5)