Dozens of people jostled their way into the crowd theater as Dana and Eliza stood obediently at the end of the line. eliza wished they would have arrived earlier. Dana told her to relax and that everyone would eventually manage to get in. Eliza remembered that the play would not start for another 15 minutes abd comforted herself by thinking about how much she was looking forward to doing it. Which revision should be made to correct a vague pronoun?
O 1. Change "they" to "she and Dana" in sentence 2.
02. Change "her" to "Eliza" in sentence 3.
03. Change "everyone" to "dozens of people" in sentence 3.
04. Change "it" to "the play" in sentence 4.

Read the thesis statement below and answer the question that follows. the life of the typical college student is characterized by time spent in many different areas. how can this thesis statement be improved?

What argument does thomas jefferson make in this excerpt from the declaration of independence? we hold these truths to be self-evident that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their creator with certain unalienable rights, that among these are life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness.-that to secure these rights, governments are instituted among men, deriving their just powers from the consent of the governed, -that whenever any form of government becomes destructive of these ends, it is the right of the people to alter or to abolish it, and to institute new government, laying its foundation on such principles and organizing its powers in such form, as to them shall seem most likely to effect their safety and happiness. a. b. c. the american colonists desire a more peaceful alliance with great britain but their british counterparts do not. the american colonists have a right to seek freedom from great britain due to the continued oppression of their basic rights. the american colonies could form a better government than the one established by great britain to govern them. the king of britain and the members of british parliament have little interest in the welfare of the colonies. od. e. the american colonies should have sufficient representation in british parliament if america and great britain are to coexist peacefully.

Constructed response paragraph: in the short story, the author describes her life during her “day away” but provides few details about her “normal” life. using information from the text, write a short story that describes events that precede the story above. as you detail the author’s daily routine before her “day away,” be sure your narrative establishes the story’s setting, first-person point of view, and primary conflict.