Read this conclusion of an argumentative essay. Our national parks are special. Most people know that, but there are a few who still have not gotten the memo. Those individuals need to understand that there are a lot of benefits we get by taking care of those places. They need to get out of their houses and take a few vacations in those parks. Catch sight of some deer or some wolves or some bears. Go camping and pick some wildflowers. Pretty soon they will see how much better nature is than their television set.

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She took up a scalpel and slit the monkey's abdomen, making a slow and gentle cut, keeping the blade well away from her gloved fingers. the spleen was puffed up and tough, leathery, like a globe of smoked salami. she did not see any bloody lesions inside this monkey. she had expected that the monkey's interior would be a lake of blood, but no, this monkey looked all right, it had not bled into itself. if the animal had died of ebola, this was not a clear case. she opened up the intestine. there was no blood inside it. the gut looked okay. then she examined the stomach. there she found a ring of bleeding spots at the junction between the stomach and the small intestine. this could be a sign of ebola, but it was not a clear sign. it could also be a sign of simian fever, not ebola. therefore, she could not confirm the presence of ebola virus in this animal based on a visual inspection of the internal organs during necropsy.

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