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While Video games [are hugely popular (or write whatever you are talking about for video games], there is a thin line between people who believe it can (controversial issue), and people who believe (supporting issue).

Explanation: I would give a better explanation than this but I can’t see your entire essay so this is the best explanation I can give you- hope it helps though!!!

teenagers are certainly stereotyped as moody.

most people view teenagers as naturally moody and grumpy, even when this is wrong. many teens are suffering from depression but it is brushed off as "just a phase" or "that's just cause they're a teenager"

answer: no

explanation: