How is the passage organized? chronological order
compare and contrast
cause and effect
problem and solution
The following is a rough draft of a student's report. It contains errors.
The Diversity of Canada
Modem Canada is a diverse country. British and French people made up 90 percent of the country's
population not long ago. Today, those same people makes up only 50 percent of the population.
Who else lives in Canada?
The country we know today, a nation made of 13 provinces and territories, came into being within
the last 150 years. The first people to live there were native peoples such as the Inuit. They came to
the land about 10,000 years ago. The original name of the country Kanata comes from these earliest
sentiers. In 1000 A. D. the first Europeans to explore the Land, the Vikings, arrived. They did not
remain in large numbers. The typical Viking warship had an average of 90 crew members. In the
1500s and 1500s modern Canada began to take shape it was during this time that French and British
colonists first arrived
The French ruled the Canadian colonies until 1763. In that year, France lost a war with Britain and
med over the territory. The British ruled the land for a lot of years. Britain wanted to in the mid-
1800s have less land in the New World to support and defend. It started to think about letting the
Canadian colonies rule themselves. Many of the people who lived in Canada were ready for this to
happen
In 1957, the colonies of Canada, New Brunswick, and Nova Scotia joined together as the Dominion
of Canada. By 1880, Canada was very close to looking like the country we know today. During the
Last half of the 1900s, more than six and a half million immigrants arrived in the country. Many of
These people were from Eastern Europe. The country continues to change, and the influence of early
scales en still be heard. Since 1969 both French and English have been the official languages of

everyday, people all over the world are making sacrifices; all for different reasons. some people may choose to do more simple sacrifices, like, "my daughter is receiving an award at school, but i also have an appointment, so i will decide to cancel that appointment to be there with my daughter" although she is cancelling her appointment, she can easily reschedule it, and spend her time with nore important thungs in life: being there with her daughter. this will make her daughter happy too because she is recieveing an award for her hard work, and it brings us happiness when our hard work is noticed and appreciated.

on the other hand, some people dont know when to make a sacrifice, ir bow to make one. well, making a sacrifice is when you do something for someone else other than yourself, for someone else's happiness, not so you can gain something in return. you do it for them, not for you. so, anyone can make a sacrifice, even the most simplest ones, like giving up the tv for a sibling or a sibling with homework, when you could be doing something else. the point is to others, when you can be doing something else. you do it out of the fact that you want to them, not so that it can benefit you.

making sacrifices benefit people in many ways, it can bring a smile to there face knowing someone is willing to and bring kindess. alot of people tend to feel unwanted and that no one is there for them, but if we show kindess and sacrifice the less importnat things in life for the most important things in life, people will once again feel happiness and more at ease knowing that someone is or was there for them, even if it be only once.

hope this , and let me know if there are any typos, it's hard typing on a phone : )

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reading poetry is challenging when you don't have or very little of social context and culture schema.

solution: read the introduction, the norm, or even explaination if you still dont get it.