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Are The Video Games Useful or Harmful?

Nowadays, all people especially children use the virtual world so much.The technology is developing day by day and people move away the real world.They are more connecting to technology. Video games are one of the technology's product.They have a lot of possitive and negative effects.

On the one hand, video games have some negative effects people's health. For example when we sit opposite the computer or TV for play video games for a long time, our body structure or our eyes may deteriorate, it may damage our brain and so on. In addition, if video games make addiction, people break from the outside world, be introvert and communication between people and loyalty are broken. One of negative effects is violent video games disrupt children's psychology and it can even cause them to harm themselves and their environment.

On the other hand, video games can be useful on some issues.For example, it can provides move around and do sports at home, improves attention. According the resources, children who play video games 1 hour a day be happier, more social and more comfortable than children who never play or children who play more 1 hour a day. One of possitive effect is Video gamers act more decisively about a choice then the other people.

In conclusion, I believe that video games have more negative effect than possitive effects. People should socialize with face to face communication, do exercise outdoor and children should play outdoor games such as hide and seek, hopscotch, skipping a rope.They shouldn't unsocialize with video games.

Explanation:

the pronoun reference replaces a noun, but you have to make sure there's no room for confusion.

in the first sentence "her" could be referring to shely or to the sister. the answer there is "shelly called her sister and told her about the new baby."

in the second sentence "it" could be referring to the roof or the floor. the answer there is "since the roof leaks on the family room floor, we need to repair the roof."