Do you think that this is good for what the teacher asked for please read it and tell me what would you change or not to will give brainliest ​

From what book is this? I think I know but I am not sure.

I think you give a strong point. Toward the end though you seem to repeat what you said in the beginning. You should probably try to backup your statement as well. Make sure to have a strong claim and reasoning and maybe add some Evidence. I like how you used the dynamic characters and tool them into comparison as well. Hope this helps :)

the civil rights act was passed on april 9, 1866 by a republican dominated congress. it was passed over president johnson's veto, in an effort to push back against discrimination of african americans.