Which of following is the best way to correct this run-on sentence? When the biology class identified a new species of
butterfly they took careful notes they also took detailed
pictures.
A. When the biology class identified a new species of butterfly. They
took careful notes. They also took detailed pictures.
B. When the biology class identified a new species of butterfly, they
took careful notes. They also took detailed pictures.
C. When the biology class identified a new species of butterfly. They
took careful notes. They also took detailed pictures.
D. When the biology class identified a new species of butterfly, they
took careful notes, they also took detailed pictures. They

B. When the biology class identified a new species of butterfly, they  took careful notes. They also took detailed pictures.

Explanation:

Run-on sentences are when two or more independent clauses are improperly connected. This means that the independent clauses are joined in such a way that the sentence seems awkward and incorrect.

In the given sentence, the first part is a dependent clause as it begins with a subordinating conjunction "when". The second and third parts of the sentence are independent clauses.

Now, a dependent clause requires an independent clause to be a complete sentence so, the dependent clause and the second sentence will be joined together with the use of a comma in between. Then, the third sentence will be a separate sentence of its own.

So, the correct answer is option B.  

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

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novels have multiple settings. a setting is a place or surrounding when a main event or event takes place. not everything happens in just one scene or setting. yes, there can be one *main* setting, but there is definitely not just one. b is incorrect. novels do not have limited characters. there are many characters in a novel, depending on how many the writer wishes to add in. c is incorrect. there is not just a single theme. there are many themes. another word for "theme" is the subject. there can be many subjects and topics. once again, there are many, depending on however many the author wishes to add or include. d is incorrect. yes, novels *can* have no solutions, based on what the author would like. but typically, novels have a solution. the solution might be in "book 5", but there is normally still a solution.

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