Which revision best removes the informal language from this passage? (1) I believe that I would make an excellent receptionist at
Animal Lovers Veterinary Clinic, because I have extensive
customer service experience. (2) As a cashier at Sir Save-
a-Lot, I served an average of 70 customers per shift. (3) My
customers were always satisfied, because, well
, I'm
basically a grocery-scanning fiend.
A. Change only sentence 2 to 'As a cashier at Sir Save-a-Lot, I had the
opportunity to provide service to an average of 70 customers per
shift."
B. Change only sentence 1 to 'I believe that I would make an
excellent receptionist at Animal Lovers Veterinary Clinic, because I
have a large amount of customer service experience."
C. Change only sentence 3 to "My customers were always satisfied,
because of my speed, skill, and attention to detail."
D. There is no informal language, so no change is necessary.