QUESTION 12 How could the following paragraph be improved?
• Jack and Jill ran. They ran up the hill. Then, they fell down, Jack hurt his leg Luckily, it did not break. After that, jack went home.
They did not run up the hill again.
By fixing the run-on sentences
By fixing the fragments
By varying sentence length
By varying sentence beginnings
How could the following paragraph be improved

Ineed . (1) chimpanzees, skillful tool-users, use several objects found in their environment as tools. (2) first of all, they use sticks. (3) they have been seen inserting carefully trimmed sticks into termite mounds and then withdrawing the sticks and eating the termites that cling to them; they also are known to use sticks to steal honey from beehives. (4) in addition, chimps use leaves in a variety of ingenious ways. (5) for example, they have been seen rolling leaves into cones to use as drinking cups, dampening them and using them to clean their bodies, and chewing them until they can serve as sponges. (6) finally, chimpanzees have been observed using stones to crack open nuts. 1. in general, the major details of this paragraph are a. ways chimpanzees learn to use objects as tools. b. reasons chimpanzees use objects as tools. c. examples of objects that chimpanzees use as tools. d. ingenious ways that chimpanzees use leaves.

When doing a close reading, what is involved in the process of annotating a text?

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