Please help me with English here is story I need 5-7 sentences with 2 pieces of evidence

Which sentence should be revised to include vivid imagery

Gatsby comment that nick looks familiar to him. what surprising connection do they have?

3. what is the purpose of a lead sentence or paragraph? to display your most convincing reasons and arguments to you revise the overall structure of your work to interest readers and introduce your writing style to add details and elaborate on your ideas