Prompt Complete the activity on p. 145 of The Language of Composition, (2nd edition: Complete the activity on p. 152.)

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BI U S

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13

2=

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c, his tragic flaw to cause his downfall

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

just to , the answer is b on edge