Please give me your honest opinion on a poem on mine! Good or bad. If there is already an "answer" please use the comment section.
This poem is about being Bisexual and searching for love but fighting self doubt and anxiety, I hope you enjoy. (I recommend reading it with "Pathways" by Prof. Lacasse playing in the background)
âRemember Himâ
By; Jacob Odom
Remember when you longed for love
That someone just meant for you
Remember when you sat alone
At your table meant for two
Remember when you fell for him
But none could ever know
Remember when your heart cried out
But you could never show
Remember when you told yourself
That âthey can never seeâ
Remember when you hoped heâd touch your hand
And whisper that his youâll be
Remember how youâd skip a beat
And feel his warm embrace
Remember how heâd look at you
With a smile across his face
Remember how heâd have cared for you
When others turned away
Remember how those who really cared
Wouldâve had your back and stay
Remember when you wouldâve told your father
Who would have scolded you to âGO AWAY!â
Remember when you wouldâve told your love
Then by his trustful side youâd lay
Now still you wish to feel his warm embrace
And the gentle comfort of his smile
Now still loyal to your love you stay
Remembering him all the while
All while youâd lay at night in sleep
All while youâd see his gentle smile
Remembering him in hopes to keep
Hoping for him to one day see
To live your life in humble glee
Remembering him as your one âto beâ
But still you sit at your table for two
Remembering when you longed for love
But it could never come trueâŚ
So alone you sit
At your table meant for two...
~
This is an updated version of my previous post about this poem (if you would like to read the original version of my post, you can find it on my account under "questions")
Answers: 1
English, 22.06.2019 00:40
(important to read ender's game before answering) in what ways can people be both intelligent and foolish at the same time? how does the author show enderâs intelligence enabling him to fight against authority? make sure your ideas are well-organized and clear. review your word choice and make sure supports your purpose. edit by correcting errors in spelling and grammar and give your work a final polish.
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English, 22.06.2019 09:30
Asap! what statement about congressional representatives is true? -they focus on what is best for government -they focus on constituents and what they need -they are members of the upper house of congress -they don't need to focus on reelection
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English, 22.06.2019 12:30
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