Which sentence has a persuasive tone? There is a picnic at the pool this afternoon offering games and refreshments. The pool will provide an afternoon picnic as a break from the daily routine. There is a rumor that the neighborhood pool is finally going to host a picnic. The pool picnic’s entertaining games and delicious food should not be missed.

D) The pool picnic’s entertaining games and delicious food should not be missed.

Explanation: took the test good luck!!!

often a noun phrase is just a noun or a pronoun:

people like to have money.

i am tired.

it is getting late.

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.