Next, write briefly about how you revised your essay, addressing the following points: Did you revise certain sections of the explication?
What was the reasoning behind your decision to revise those sections?
How do you feel about the results of the revisions?
Analyze your choices in revision based on the checklist. How does your essay align with the revision checklist?
Type your response in the space provided.

- "in the declaration of independence, it is stated that all people have certain rights that can't be taken away. when the government fails to protect these rights, the people have no choice but to remove that government and replace it with a government that will do its job and protect the people's rights."

- "about the claims : -

making a claim is just a fancy way of saying that you're stating your main point.' claims are not just opinions. a claim tells what you think is true about a topic based on your knowledge .

about the country claims : -

a counterclaim is just the opposite of a claim. counterclaims are also provable and supportable by reasons and evidence. not just, 'because i said so.' when you're planning an argument, you need to know what the counterclaim might be so that you can make sure that you disprove it with your reasons and evidence your research." - (catherineroberts)

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