Can anyone make this some better? More intelligent maybe? Thanks! Growing up, I've always felt a natural ability and sense of fascination in both mathematics and science. Mathematics seems a very practical topic to many, but I love it because it helps us understand concepts beyond our cognitive abilities. Similarly, science is a topic that can answer some of our deepest questions about life, but at the same time, leave even deeper questions behind. As our understanding of life, the universe and everything expands we realise that there is even more we don't understand. That unlimited potential is exciting... that's why I find science so amazing. Human physiology and astronomy are my greatest interests, and I want to broaden my range of knowledge about them as much as I can. With the goal of going into medical school and becoming a well-respected pulmonologist, I understand the importance of getting as much experience and knowledge as I can early on in my education. That is why I've participated in many science and math programs such as, BCA Biology, Chemistry, and Algebra 2 Programs, the MathCon, and Advanced and Honors Maths and Sciences throughout middle school and high school. With the same love, passion and dedication, I look forward to attending and learning the most I can at the Columbia University Science Honors Program.

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When I was growing up, in mathematics and science I always had a natural skill and curiosity. Many people think mathematics is a very realistic subject, but I love it as it allows us to grasp ideas outside our cognitive ability. Similarly, science can answer some of our more fundamental questions about creation, but it still leaves deeper questions unanswered. We know that we don't understand any much as we develop our knowledge of life, the world and everything. This limitless ability is fantastic... that is why I think science is so incredible. My greatest ambitions are human physiology and astronomy and I want to apply my area of expertise to them in the greatest possible way. I recognize how important it is to attend medical school and become an admired pulmonologist. I recognize the value of acquiring the greatest possible amount of experience and expertise in my schooling early on. That is why I have been interested in many research and mathematical activities such as BCA biology, chemistry and Algebra 2 programs, MathCon, Advanced and Honorary Maths and Sciences in middle and secondary schools. I look forward to attend and research the Columbia University Honors Program with the same love, zeal and commitment.

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i think it's either 'to expose the corruption of the communists in russia', or 'to criticize animal brutality by communists in russia.'  

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