1. Read the lines of dialogue below and identify the necessary revision. "What time are you going to the party tonight?" Mark inquired.

"About 6:00 p. m., I guess," Jillian responded.

"Why so early?" Mark asked.

"Why not?" Jillian spit back.

1. The verbs in the dialogue tags are bland and overused.

2. The speaker of each line of dialogue is unclear.

3. The names of the characters need not be repeated once it is clear who is speaking.

4. There are too many questions within the conversation.

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the correct answer is "(13) “they take a term that sounds really wonderful, but genetic engineering is genetic engineering is genetic engineering,” ms. tencer said. “it is not something farmers want. it is not something consumers want. i don’t think it is a very viable concept.” by explicitly stating that farmers or consumers do not want genetic engineering to produce their food the existence of opposition towards genetically modified organisms is presented. also, it is worth mentioning that ms. tender is the executive director of the organic farming research foundation in santa cruz, ca as stated in evidence 12, which supports her statement presented in evidence 13.

margaret paston and william paston got married in 1441. as william had to attend business, margaret was in charge of administrating her husband's properties and they communicated each other by letters. they had 7 children.   margery paston, one of those children, had a secret romance with richard calle, the family's bookkeeper and the pastons rejected them, as they tend to get marriage arranged for their children. margery and richard ended up getting married for love, but in secret by the church bishop.