Can someone rewrite this pl ASAP Mr. Bedford, you should definitely go to the moon. It is a once in a lifetime opportunity and you could not just turn it down. I know that there are risks of failure that could end badly, but it is worth it. You have worked so hard with Mr. Cavor that you can't just give this up. Yes your business had a downfall but that shoukd not stop you. I know that you might be a little scared or unsure if this will work and I can see that. What is you say no, but it works. What if it works and everything goes right, but you missed the opportunity to go to space, to see that stars and the moon, to see our planet in a way no one has ever seen it before. Then would you be sad and angry that you said no. Then would you have wanted to go and wished you said yes. Keep up the good work and you will make it, you will succeed and it will all be worth it.

Mr. Bedford, you should definitely go to the moon. It is a once in a lifetime opportunity and you could not just turn it down. I know that there are risks of failure that could end badly, but it is worth it. You have worked so hard with Mr. Cavor that you can't just give this up. Yes your business had a downfall but that shoukd not stop you. I know that you might be a little scared or unsure if this will work and I can see that. What is you say no, but it works. What if it works and everything goes right, but you missed the opportunity to go to space, to see that stars and the moon, to see our planet in a way no one has ever seen it before. Then would you be sad and angry that you said no. Then would you have wanted to go and wished you said yes. Keep up the good work and you will make it, you will succeed and it will all be worth it.

Mr Bedford,

    Go to the moon, this is a once in a lifetime opportunity. It would be a huge mistake if you were to turn this down. There are risks in failure, but this would be so worth it if you knew you were going to the moon. You have worked so hard with Mr. Cavor and you really just can't give up all of your hard work. Just because your work had a slide bump in the road, doesn't mean you shouldn't go. Lots of people would be unsure about going, and i can see you are too. Like would if it works, when you say no to the opportunity? What if everything works perfectly, but you just didn't have the guts to go? If you go, you will be able to see the stars, moon, and our planet the way we all won't be able to see it. If you don't go, you will look back and say, "I should've gone, because i would see everything people wonder." I hope you keep up the good work, i know you will make it, you will succeed and it will be so worth it!

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