In a well-developed paragraph, analyze poe’s theme in “the premature burial.” your paragraph should state the theme in one sentence. what specific story elements (plot, setting, characters, or conflict) are essential in developing the theme? be sure you use specifics from the text that you noted in your reading journal in writing your response.

heritage? culture? religion? gene? trait?

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.