Ray hesitated, clutching the small, broken gift in his hands.
He felt ridiculous. I guess you
don't want my present then he
asked. The only thing I want
from you is for you to leave
Linda said, wiping away her
tears. You think one present
can make up for all those
missing years? Rav pur the
damaged photo frame down
on a nearby table. Of course
not. I'm sorry i spoiled your brg
day. He paused for a moment, then turned and walked out. correct the dialogue ​

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Ray hesitated, clutching the

small, broken gift in his hands.

He felt ridiculous. "I guess you

don't want my present then" he

asked. "The only thing I want

from you is for you to leave"

Linda said, wiping away her

tears. "You think one present

can make up for all those

missing years?" Ray put the

damaged photo frame down

on a nearby table. "Of course

not. I'm sorry I spoiled your big

day." He paused for a moment, then turned and walked out.

c, his tragic flaw to cause his downfall

to persuade readers which is answer c