Choose the most fluid revision of the following paragraph: The children laughed. The boy opened his presents. The
clown performed funny magic tricks.
A. The children laughed, and the boy opened his presents. The clown
performed funny magic tricks.
B. While the boy opened his presents, the children laughed as the
clown performed funny magic tricks,
C. While the children laughed, the clown performed funny tricks. The
boy opened his presents.
O D. None of the above are correct.