Hi read my horror story tell me what's the mistakes and what I should improve thank you

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Discuss the theme of outcasts in these chapters in at least two hundred words. what does it mean that the church takes in people that the clan rejects? how is nwoye an outcast? how does the clan treat the missionaries as outcasts?

Ispeak without a mouth and hear without ears. i have no body, but i come alive with wind. what am i?