This is the second chapter of a book im writing, does anyone have any ideas? btw if you claim its your ITS NOT. i have three other chapters in the workings right now. or just tell me what you think about it

i prefer dogs : ) they are floofyyy

as you read the passage below, consider how dana gioia uses

evidence, such as facts or examples, to support claims.

reasoning to develop ideas and to connect claims and evidence.

stylistic or persuasive elements, such as word choice or appeals to emotion, to add power to the ideas expressed.

explanation:

honestly you should not write it the word placement is not right and this does not sound right so i think you should write it this way. the life lessons i refused to learn, taught me the hard way this sounds way better you should try it! hope this is very !

answer: a mother fears that the poor lighting poses a danger to the children who play there.