After reading the first 12 chapters of THE BELL JAR, I have to write a friendly letter to Esther giving her advice and support. I have to include quotes from the book and this is what I have so far. can I get some feedback?

This is good but I personally don't recommend you to write prepositions at the first sentence.

Explanation:

In my opinion, putting prepositions at the first sentence aren't so proper.

1. this would be first person. it would be like "i walked home from school today" they are the narrator of the story and is a character as well.

2. first person because they used the word "i" in the quote.

3. i'm really not sure about this one i'm really sorry i never read it so i wouldn't know how to answer it. 

4. it would be character vs. society because everyone he meets there is always a conflict of some sort because he's stuck in his daydream.

5. it would be sadness at the loss of youth because the title itself tells us it's about age so it couldn't be about regret. and the tone just sounds sad, not angry. 

i hope this !