Proofread the paragraph. Rewrite the paragraph in the space below, correcting any fragments or mistakes in sentence capitalization and punctuation. last night my sister wanted to go to the movies? I wanted to go with her. what was stopping us. I had to finish my math homework first. I asked my sister to wait for me? what do you think she did. She helped me figure out the answers. made it to the show just in time

don't come near me, i might sneeze on you

explanation:

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

question: why should you take some time to reflect on the interview after it's over?

answer: to review what went well and learn how to do it better next time

explanation: you do this so incase you did bad on this interview you can reflect back on it and fix the mistakes you missed and when you do another interview you will do great because you reflected and studied what you did wrong

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(jacemorris)