Tony Stark wanted a flock of backyard chickens but, there was no good place in his yard for them to live. is this sentence correct. Are there supposed to be no commas?

Aman lives on the twelfth floor of an apartment building. every morning he takes the elevator down to the lobby and leaves the building. in the evening, he gets into the elevator, and, if there is someone else in the elevator -- or if it was raining that day -- he goes back to his floor directly. otherwise, he goes to the tenth floor and walks up two flights of stairs to his apartment.

Which of these is not a function of juliet’s soliloquy

Which details from the excerpt best indicate that the tomb is a frightening place ?