Pls help have until 6! Freddie and Christopher were walking down the street. They were on their way to school. They came to an intersection and stopped. A blue truck came speeding past them! There was a police car chasing after the truck. Its lights and sirens were on. Freddie and Christopher were amazed. They ran after the cars for a while. They stopped soon. They had to go to school. That night, the news said that there had been a high speed-chase. Somebody robbed a bank and tried to flee the police. They were caught. Rewrite the above paragraph by varying sentence structure to add interest and meaning.

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the story is told by a young girl who loves reading journals and listening to radio. she seems as an attentive and joyful girl. however, when the story unravels later this turns out to be upside down. she is actually a naive girl.  

she meets with a boy while skating and he tells her that will call her. the problem of the story epitomizes here because he never calls and she acknowledges the fact that she is not a foolish. indeed, her communication with the boy identifies their relationship after all. it is somehow the struggle between emotional and physical engagement which we can only observe the latter one from the boy’s side. so that, the conflict is disclosed how it has been presented in the beginning where the girl believes that she is not a fool. the reader questions her self-confidence and understanding, as well as her sincerity.