Which sentence did Sara change MOST when creating her final draft? (Which sentence most needs revising?)

There is no attatchmen fyi so Im not sure what to answer

the excerpt from chapter 2 of "animal farm", by george orwell that is an example of foreshadowing is "these three (snowball, napoleon, and squealer) had elaborated old major's teachings into a complete system of thought to which they gave the name of animalism." animal farm is an allegory of how czarist russia developed into communist russia with all its corruption. old major's teachings represent marx's theories turned into communism, animalism, by the three pigs. this foreshadows the oppression and corruption that will follow this revolt.

they both lost a woman they loved named lenore

they believed they interracted with a talking raven

they became orphaned at a young age.