Reflect upon your analysis, and write a two-paragraph reflection of at least 200 words. In the first paragraph discuss what elements of your outline are successful. Consider details you included, and the organizational structure of your outline. In the second paragraph discuss the elements of your outline that could benefit from further development. Consider important details you may have omitted, and reflect upon your outline organization. Use specific details from your writing. Outline:
How to Make Rock Candy

Ingredients and utensils
a medium saucepan
8 cups of refined white sugar
2 cups of heated water
kitchen string cut into six-inch sections
favorite food coloring
a clear jar
a pencil
Combining the ingredients
Heating the water
Combining sugar and water
Adding food coloring
Continuing to stir
Prepare the mixture
Pouring the mixture in the jar
Tying the string to the pencil
Putting the pencil over the jar and placing the string into the jar
End result
Crystals will start to form
Wait longer for larger crystals
Enjoy the crystals

Welcome to the vocabulary assessment. by connecting with words in a more interactive way, through a graphic organizer that includes your own ideas, we hope you will learn new vocabulary strategies to integrate into your course work and your everyday life. objectives: use a variety of techniques to acquire a range of words determine, clarify, and illustrate the meaning of unfamiliar words to ensure that you properly and successfully complete the vocabulary assessment, do the following: complete the assessment using the passage provided. select a word from the passage, and identify/create each of the following for that word: denotation connotations synonyms antonyms affixes the sentence from the passage where the word appears an original sentence using the word a memory trick type your responses in the appropriate boxes. after you have typed your responses, print your graphic organizer and submit it to your teacher. be careful not to refresh the page before printing, as some browsers will not save your work. passage from "the pit and the pendulum" by edgar allan poe very suddenly there came back to my soul motion and sound—the tumultuous motion of the heart, and in my ears the sound of its beating. then a pause in which all is blank. then again sound, and motion, and touch, a tingling sensation pervading my frame. then the mere consciousness of existence, without thought, a condition which lasted long. then, very suddenly, thought, and shuddering terror, and earnest endeavor to comprehend my true state. then a strong desire to lapse into insensibility. then a rushing revival of soul and a successful effort to move. and now a full memory of the trial, of the judges, of the sable draperies, of the sentence, of the sickness, of the swoon. then entire forgetfulness of all that followed; of all that a later day and much earnestness of endeavor have enabled me vaguely to recall.

Which passage from the story best shows how the mothers attitude toward gregor has changed

Which of these sentences uses parallel structure