How does the new jacket compare to the one that the narrator wanted? (Paragraphs 2-3) A. The new jacket is too small, unlike the baggy leather jacket that he wanted.
B. The new jacket is covered in ugly studs, unlike the plain leather jacket he
wanted.
C. The new jacket is his least favorite color, green, unlike the black leather jacket he
wanted.
The new jacket is too large and an ugly color, unlike the cool leather jacket that
he wanted

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

amaterasu is my sister! wow so rude!

in my opinion i think it was not excessive at all. the maids turned against the queen in his absence, how could he ever trust them again? if he let them go they would surely spread the news of the suitor's deaths, which is much too risky. as for the suitors, they were selfish, rude, and greedy. the god's had apparently marked them for death, meaning odysseus made their death come faster.