Fix the sentence Numbers, Plurals, Abbreviation, Comma Splice, Spelling, Comma (Other) Attendence at the soccer game on Sept. 3 was 10379, approximately twenty percent
were between 8 and sixteen years old.

Attendance at the soccer game on September 3rd was 10,679. Approximately 20%  were between 8 and 16 years old.

Explanation:

yes, it is ethos.

i hope this !

-maddie

cause they were to dumb to get their college education to become a real   : )